Readmission help!!!!

[Kaitlinash59]

Can anyone help me and review my letter for readmission? It is only the first draft, but I'm really nervous that I won't get back in. Thank you for any help, and critiquing you're greatly appreciated!

"Readmission committee,

I was previously a student in the 2-year ADN program. I would first like to apologize for my academic failure.

I cannot place the blame of my failure on anything, or anyone, but myself. I was only behind by less than two percent, and now wish I would have pushed myself more to get where I needed to be. Coming into my seventh quarter of eight I was not prepared for the amount of content that NUR 265 included. If I would have been more prepared, and took more time to go over content to make sure I understood the pathology of each disease process I know I could have done much better in this class. Working five days a week has also held me back in this program. In order to make changes, and improve my learning skills, and study habits I have created a plan to do so. This plan will include actively working with study groups, attending meetings with my academic advisor, and attending each exam review. To resolve my work issue I have decreased my hours to only working three days a week. In doing so I will have more time for school which will assist me in my academic success. I know everyone goes through tough times, and it is up to me to keep pushing, and working towards my dream of becoming an amazing nurse that I know I can be. My time at Galen has been nothing but a great experience on campus, and at clinicals. With only three to six months left of my ADN, I would love to be able continue my education at Galen. I have no doubt I will finish out the last two quarters strong if given the opportunity to do so.

Thank you for your time,

Kaitlin Ash."

any feedback is wondeful!