Admissions Essay

[CNAinNeb]

One of my questions on a 2nd degree application is "why this school?" My first thought was "What do you mean why? I'm applying to every freakin school in a 90 min radius and you guys are on the radar." This response is of course not going on my app, but I am honestly not quite sure what admissions is looking for on this question.

Perhaps I should say that their 2nd degree program will allow me to build on my previous education and experience to be a leader in the nursing community, or that their strong commitment to research and serving others closely aligns with my views. I don't know, I'm lost. What do you think they are looking for?

[TenderLovingDreamz]

Maybe you could check out their website and look for their mission statement, goals, or philosophy and work that into your essay. Saying something like " I want to go to your school because you believe in blah, blah, blah".

Thats just what I would do. Hope it helps :)

[RNSES]

Be honest. Don't try to figure out what they are looking for and figure out what you're looking for. If you are applying to every school in your area (and believe me, I know where you're coming from), then maybe incorporate that (spun in a positive way of course;)). The rest of what you said (their goals aligned with yours, etc.) is really good. GL!