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Resume Objective feedback please

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I am in the process of applying for new graduate RN position. I would appreciate some feedback and suggestions regarding the "Objective Statement" that I wrote.

Professional Objective: "A dedicated, compassionate, team-oriented, and multi-lingual Registered Nurse with excellent time management and organizational skills seeking nursing employment within XYZ hospital. Self-motivated professional with a strong work ethic and commitment to supporting team objectives to provide exceptional customer service and highest-quality patient care."

Thank you so much in advance!

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Enarra has 8 years experience as a BSN, RN and specializes in Ambulatory Primary Care.

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It’s way to long for an objective save something for the interview.   Too much text make the reader not want to read it and remember you only have a few seconds to grab your readers attention so KISS acronym applies:  keep it short simple and sweet.   It should be sentence summarizing what you want to do and why. 

My objectIve reads like so:    Work in an area where I can contribute my clinical, nursing skills as a nursing professional, providing compassionate care.
      
good luck

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Last time I read about resumes it was advised to ditch the objective as well as the phrase about providing references.

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