The University of Detroit Mercy (location also in West Michigan) is an excellent school, however, it is true that GVSU is a faster route via the 2nd Degree Program. Buyer beware, ask any experienced nurse in the hospitals here and I usually don't hear of GVSU topping the list of turning out the best (most prepared) grads. Personally, I do wish some other schools would find ways to get more 2nd Degree Students through the program more efficiently and with less red tape.
Yes, I agree with the above, that your most important point needs to stand out at the top. Also, regarding the objective, unless you have special requirements such as: part-time, nights, weekend option, it goes without saying. Also I would space the larger categories together, and consider some bullet points regarding skills, etc. WOW!! Great information on your resume.