help me rephrase this please!

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"Monitored and reported any critical changes to baseline in vital signs and blood sugar values to immediate supervisor."

I am a nurse intern/ glorified nurse tech and am applying for my first Rn job. Is there a way to better phrase this idea?

Thank you in advance!

-sd

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I think everything sound fine except the immediate supervisor. I think maybe putting preceptor or something sounds better.

Also, I would allow for your reference people to mention you are a glorified tech because even though you might be, it sounds slightly on the cocky side. I am not saying you aren't, but it sounds better when it comes from a reference rather than your self. I know you aren't putting that on the resume, but still...

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"Monitored and reported any critical changes to baseline in vital signs and blood sugar values to immediate supervisor."
Monitored Vital signs and POC glucoses, reporting critical values to RN
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Effectively communicates vital signs, behavior changes and blood sugar values with appropriate follow up as instructed per the RN.

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