Seeking Resume Help

So I met with a nurse recruiter whom helped me with my resume. I am concerned as I was informed that there is no need to use descriptive words and to make it short. I have been applying to different hospitals and have had no luck...

Here's an example of what my resume looks like. I would highly appreciate any help.

Thanks

Name

address

phone

email address

Education

Bachelor of Science in Nursing, School Name, 20**

Experience

RN, Med-Surgical Unit

00/20** - 00/20** Hospital's Name , City , state -

Managed care for 5- 6 patients. Population included:

• Acute/Chronic Renal Failure
  
• Rule out Myocardial Infarctions, Congestive Heart Failure
  
• Blood Administration
  
• Wound Care
  

RN, Med-Surgical Unit

00/20** - 00/20** Hospital's Name, City, state-

Managed care for adults, pediatrics, and geriatric patients care included:

• Pre/Post Surgical Patients
  
• Cardiac Drips
  
• Insulin Drips
  
• Telemetry Monitoring
  
• Stroke Care
  
• Pneumonia, RSV
  
• Post-op pacemaker
  

Skills

Languages (Speak/Read/Write)

Arrhythmia Interpretation

License and Certifications

RN License

BLS

ACLS