personal statement proof-read/re-edit request

[hiep]

Hi everyone, please pardon my little time spent in allnurses forums. But I have read lots of posts during my breaks and they're so thoughtful and enjoyable. I've finished a personal statement along with a resume for nursing application for Uni of WA Welcome to the UW SON

My personal statement contains sensitive information that I don't want to disclose in public. Is there anyone willing to help me with this request? I understand that I had not contribute anything to allnurses yet but will try to help other fellows in future if time is affordable.

Please post a reply that I could private message you and send my resume along with personal statement to you for help. Thank you so much, happy new year and holidays.

Sincerely,

hiep

[jschut, BSN, RN]

heip,

maybe you could explain a bit further what you are needing help with, and we could help then.

I'm trying to understand, but am afraid I'm not quite there yet!

[hiep]

Thanks so much Julie,

my intend was to find someone that will give feedback and proof reading my personal statement. i thought my personal statement was too passive and afraid the admission committee would not consider me as a candidate even though I had other qualities.

Julie, please let me know promtly that you can help me. Thank you so much, have a nice day.

hiep.

[Lori RN_09_2b]

Hi,

If you haven't found help yet, I'd be willing. I use to be a freelance proofreader and am a pretty good writer. Let me know!

Lori

[hiep]

thanks so much everyone, especially to kevin :). i had successfully completed my application with everything else in the package and i had turned the application in. all it is left that i should wait. i wish you all great happiness and happy coming holidays.

best regards & sincere,

hiep.

[canoehead, BSN, RN]

Good luck to you.

[hiep]

thank you canoehead. i've so much hope for it. it's my dream.

best regards & sincere,

hiep.