Help with my resume

[aellisrn]

please help me make my resume more appealing!

see attached, and all identifying information has been taken off.

i am emailing it in response to an ad i saw online. i'm also copying & pasting my email body/cover letter

thanks!!

here's the add.....

we are recruiting for efficient, dedicated, cheerful employees to join our team to work full time, 4x10 hour shifts, which includes every other saturday at the _______ clinic. the position requires rn, lpn, mlt, cma, or rt credentials, and the ideal applicant will have 2-5 years of medical office experience. however, we are always willing to train exceptional candidates! to be considered, please email your resume to

heres my email body/cover letter

[color=#333333]to whom it may concern:

[color=#333333]i read your job posting for a registered nurse on your website.

[color=#333333]i graduated from ________ community college in may with an associate of applied science in nursing. i am licensed as a registered nurse in the state of mississippi. however please do not disregard my resume because i am a "new graduate." i would be a great asset to your company because i am eager to put my newly acquired nursing knowledge to work. i learn very fast and am highly motivated in any type of environment. as your job posting states, "willing to train exceptional candidates," i will be that exceptional candidate if given the opportunity with said company.

[color=#333333]my resume is attached in this email. please feel free to contact me if you have any questions regarding my resume. i look forward to hearing from you. thank you for your time and consideration.

jane l doe

1234 address street

kalamazoo mi 12345

[phone]

[email protected]

MOCK resume.doc