Cover letter help.

I am currently working in Rehab. I am planning to move to general medicine unit. Can you please check my cover letter? and can you please also check spelling and grammar?

Thanks.

December 7, 13

X X Hospital

Dear Nurse Manager,

As recent palliative and low tolerance long duration rehab experience in the YY hospital who has been successfully providing compassionate and comprehensive patient care with excellent nursing knowledge, I am currently seeking a position as a Registered Nurse in the medicine unit at the XX Hospital. My ability to focus on enhancing quality of life through meeting the physical, emotional, psychological, and spiritual needs of the patients and their family members would be a solid match for your requirements.

As a staff nurse at the YY hospital, I have taken responsibilities including applying knowledge of nursing science, theory, skill, and critical decision making in a fast paced environment. I have developed skills including how to communicate and collaborate professionally with colleagues and multi-disciplinary team. I have participated in rounds to evaluate the nursing care plans and to discuss about development and implementation of comprehensive care planning and goal setting with the multi-disciplinary team.

I am excited to be a member of your team and develop clinical expertise and in-depth knowledge in caring for patients at the XX Hospital.

My resume is enclosed for your consideration. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I can make a positive contribution to the health care team at the XX Hospital. Please contact me at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely