I have graduated over a year ago from a diploma program and have applied almost everywhere in my state. I really think I need a critique of my cover letter mostly. I do not have any job experience in health care so I try to fluff my resume up as much as possible with other things. I am just providing my generalized cover letter not directed to a specific position or place. I have taken out as many identifiers as I can so sorry if it seems very broad. Please tell me how I can make this better!!! I do not know anyone who has ever written a resume for a career type job so I really have nobody else to review this. Dear Hiring Manager, I would like to express my interest in the Registered Nurse position at __________ in _________. I have graduated from _________ Nursing School in August of 2013 with an Associate in Science and a Diploma in Nursing. I am currently enrolled in the RN to BSN program at _______ University and I am expected to complete the program in Spring 2017. I am confident that I will be a valuable member of your team by applying skills that I have developed through my work, volunteer, and clinical experiences. Through my clinical experiences on various units, I have developed my ability to critically think, provide professional and quality care, and have practiced a range of skills that have effectively prepared me to begin employment as a registered nurse. My strong background in the service industry has allowed me to excel in teamwork and time management skills. I have also become skilled at remaining calm and thinking quickly in situations where I need to change priorities while handling many responsibilities. I currently volunteer with the Red Cross at the blood donation center to check in donors, and I have also volunteered within my local community providing health screenings. I strongly believe that I am prepared to provide high quality and compassionate patient care, and I am more than willing to continue to learn and advance my profession. I have graduated on the Presidents List with High Honors and have also received the ________ Award for Excellence in Medical Nursing. I would enjoy the opportunity to meet with you personally to further discuss this position. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to speaking with you soon. Sincerely, Me Name Address Phone E-mail PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE Registered Nurse seeking a position that will allow me the opportunity to grow professionally, gain practical knowledge and home the art and skills of compassionate and expert patient care. LICENSES AND CERTIFICATIONS Registered Nurse in the State of _________, License #xxxxxxx, 10/9/13 ACLS Provider, American Heart Association, 11/5/13 PALS Provider, American Heart Association, 12/9/14 BLS Instructor, American Heart Association, 12/18/14 BLS for Healthcare Providers, American Heart Association, 10/7/13 IV Therapy Certification, Emergency Cardiac Care Inc., 11/10/14 EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Nursing, Expected Graduation Date: Spring 2017 _________ University, location Associate of Science & Diploma in Nursing, August 2013, GPA 3.68 ___________ School of Nursing, location AWARDS AND HONORS Excellence in Medical Nursing, ________ Award, __________ School of Nursing, August 2013 Presidents List & High Honors, school, Spring 2013 WORK EXPERIENCE Server, Restaurant, 02/14-Present Working as a team to provide professional, fast-paced service, anticipating guest needs, and managing time efficiently while remaining organized Barista, Café, 05/12-04/13 Provided customer service, performed sales transactions, prepared various menu items with precision, and maintained cleanliness Reason for leaving: Store closed Server, Restaurant, 11/10-08/11 Worked as a team to provide excellent service, anticipated guest needs, and managed time effectively while remaining organized Reason for leaving: Business closed PROFESSIONAL ACTIVITIES State Nurses Association, 2014 National Student Nurses Association, 2012-2013 VOLUNTEER ACTIVITIES Blood Services Volunteer, American Red Cross, location, 02/2013-Present Blood Pressure Screening, National Kidney Foundation, location, 11/2014