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This essay is for anursing program to a hospital . Please let me know what changes needs to be made to make this appealing of a essay to read. It started out like any other day. The sound of my husband's footsteps pacing around the apartment in an attempt to race against time and leave the house before traffic accumulates. I gathered the effort to get myself out of bed and do the daily routines that I do before leaving for work. The day consisted of opening my father's stores, performing inventory, closing weekly sales and later on attending a Manager's meeting at Subway World Headquarters. This has been my daily routine for the past few years. As the child of immigrant parents, I found it difficult to enjoy life since I had the commitment of managing my father's multi-chain stores. My intentions was not to lead such a life, however, after my father being diagnosed with prostate cancer, I made it my number one priority to help my him. It was around 12:30 in the afternoon when I received the most awaited phone call. My best friend, Nicole, had gone into labor. There was sudden rush of adrenaline through my nerves and it was very hard for me to keep my excitement inside during the busiest hour of a restaurant. After what seemed to be an infinite drive, I finally reached my final destination: South County Hospital in Wakefield, Rhode Island. I hastened my way to the appropriate room and waited alongside my family members for next ten hours. During the last stage of birthing process, I was fortunate to be there and witness the birth of Aiden. In the hours before giving birth, Nicole was crying out of pain and my uncle pacing around the room unsure of how he could help lessen the pain. A sigh of relief came when the doctor said, "It's a boy!" and changed the tense atmosphere and produced smiles on everyone. The most empowering moment of all was when a nurse handed the baby to his mother. It was in this precise moment that I saw nurses in different limelight. How wonderful of a feeling it is for a nurse to be involved in handing over a mother's child to her for the very first time. I was able to witness the hard work that nurses endured. The emotion that was displayed by them after Aiden's birth seemed so sincere and unforced even though they had partaken in many other births that day. This was the day that I decided to become a nurse and be present in a person's life from the day they were born. Since that date, I embarked on obtaining information for nursing programs. I registered myself for six classes for Fall 2011 semester along with obtaining a Nursing assistant certificate and managing to work thirty hours per week. I had set myself a goal that I would fulfill all the need perquisites and submit my application before the deadline. My determination and hard work allowed me to grow as a candidate. Volunteering at the hospital has confirmed my ultimate goal of becoming a neo-natal nurse.

I have submit an essay on a significant experience, achievement, ethical dilemma that I may have faced and its impact on me. I never really had much of an interest with babies, however the recent birth of my best-friend's baby, changed all of that. When I found out that she was giving birth, I rushed myself to hospital and was there to witness the birth of her son along with her husband. The experience was definitely eye opening for me. I could see the pain that she was suffering during the birthing process, however, when the process was complete and she was given the her baby by a nurse, I could see a room full of joy (including the medical staff and us) The sudden shift in my best friend's face going from misery to a state of bliss was amazing. I found a new appreciation for babies and nurses. The nurses were there all along to constantly monitor the condition of my friend and her baby. I was certain that the nurses had seen many woman giving birth on daily basis but the expression on their face seemed to be so sincere. It was during this moment that I got I desire to become neo-natal nurse. How wonderful would it be to be part of such a miracle given by God and delivered by a woman who endured countless hours of sleep and pain. The end result makes up for it. It is this event that inspired me to become a Certified Nursing Assistant, and to volunteer at the Emergency Room of Hospital. A nurse is present in a person's life from the day they were born. This isn't my essay final copy. It just an idea that I have come up with. I would love suggestions. If you think I should write about something else, then please let me know. If you think I should expand on certain parts PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me know. Your help will be truly be appreciate.

I have to write a essay describing an important event, ethical dilemma, acheivement that I have faced and the impact on me. I tried to commit suicide a year ago by overdosing and ended up in the hospital. It was the most irresponsible thing I have done in my life. I was under a lot of pressure and instead of seeking help from a friend or professional, I resorted to taking my own life. I can never forget the pain that my actions had caused my family and my self: physically and emotionally of doing such a stupid thing. While, I was there in the hospital the nurses there knew what I had done however could not stress to me that it was the wrong thing to do. They provided me a lot of care and attention from my time in the ER to the ICU to the recovery period. It was right there and then that I looked at nurses and the hardwork and patience that have in taking care of the sick patients. I decided there that, as soon as I get out, I will try to take all the prerequisites and apply for nursing school. I wanted to be part of a profession that made a difference in someone's life. Even though they did not tell me what I had done was wrong, but it was the little things that they provided or did for me that made me see how beautiful life is and how loving people are. I want to know I can write about this event for my essay. If so, can you please make suggestions how I can further discuss it.