i 100% agree with daytonite! the relay for life would be an amazing and heartfelt story. you would become a real person rather than just another application. it needs to be exciting and show compassion and determination for the field of nursing. the application tells your amazing background and education. they want to know why you want to be a nurse. this type of story that will knock their socks off and score major points for you. if you tell them everything about yourself now what will you talk about during the interview?