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What should I not put into an person essay for Nursing school? This is an entrance essay.

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The important items for a personal statement for nursing school to cover are: who are you, why nursing school, why this nursing school, and why you are a good fit for the program. Realize that this is a persuasive essay and should be written as such - you need to make yourself be the best possible fit as an applicant for the school.

Do not overshare personal information - the school needs enough to get a sense of who you are an how you will fit into the culture of the program, but doesn't need all the gory details. Only share personal information that adds support to why you are pursing nursing school and why that particular program, keep careful watch that everything is phrased professionally and not overly emotional or personal in tone.

Even more so than content, schools will be evaluating your ability to articulate your thoughts clearly, concisely, and in fluent English that conveys understanding of vocabulary and grammar skills. Assuming this is not a proctored essay, I highly recommend having a friend, instructor, or other individual proof read for you.

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I agree with the post above ... but adding.

As you start to work on this essay, start with the truth -- and don't stray from that. This is not the time to lie. There is no magic "right" answer, but a lie is usually a "wrong" one. Most people who read those essays and/or do interviews of applicants can spot a liar -- and they/we don't like them. Getting caught in a lie can get you eliminated from serious consideration. So be sure that what you write is the truth and that you can talk about it in an interview comfortably.

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Also, if the school gave you any rubric for the statement (length/word count, specific questions to address, etc.), be sure you follow their directions precisely. If that's the case, part of the evaluation is to see how well you follow directions. Writing a lot more about why you want to be a nurse than they said they wanted you to write will hurt you, not help you.

If they gave you specific questions, be sure you respond to all the questions asked, in the order they listed them.

Oh, and please don't say you want to be a nurse because you "want to help people." I've been on admissions committees, and, when we saw that, we would just groan and toss the application. You need to have some motivation and interest more personal and specific than wanting to "help people."

Best wishes!

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