is this a good thank you note? I need feed back, please.

[Nurseadam]

Dear Ms. ... :

Thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to talk to me about the ER position. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me.

After speaking with you and (name), I believe that I would be a good candidate for this position, offering the quick learning and adaptability that is needed for a fast paced enviorment for this position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring great critical thinking and customer services to your department.

I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position.

Thank you again for your time and consideration. Sincerely,

Name

Should I add/delete anything? it's an ER position.. Any feedback would be appreciated. I will be delivering it to the ER tomorrow morning by hand. Should I add a smiley face? The manager has a goofy personality, she was making jokes and laughing.

[Armygirl7]

No smiley face! Ever!

Excellent letter - it's really the gesture of the letter and not the content so much (as long as all grammar and spelling are correct that is) that the hiring manager will notice.

Good luck - hope you get the job!