Constructive criticism on my resume, please...?

[BiohazardBetty]

I always get such great advice on allnurses, I would like to get some constructive criticism on my resume. Obviously I changed a few names to maintain my privacy, but the over all format is the same.

Is it a good length? Too much worthless info? I appreciate your feedback!!

NURSING EXPERIENCE

06/11-07/11 XXXXX Hospital America, USA

Out-Patient Surgery Externship- Clinical Preceptor: Sarah XXXX, RN

• Assisted in the completion of pre- and post- surgical assessments
  
• Safely administered post-operative medications, under preceptor's supervision
  
• Provided teaching to patients and their families regarding pre- and post- operative routines, smoking cessation, dietary requirements, physical activity, and disease management
  

08/10-Present Clinical Rotations 450 Hours Completed

XXXX Medical Center- Short Stay Surgery, PACU, OR, Digestive Health Center, Medical-Surgical, Pulmonary Care, Neonatal, Emergency Department, Wound Center, Cardiac Unit, Behavioral Health Center

XXXX Regional Health Center- OR, Medical-Surgical, Labor and Delivery, Orthopedic, Psychiatric Unit

XXXX Memorial Hospital- Medical-Surgical, Pediatrics, Emergency Department

PROFESSIONAL STRENGTHS

• Assertive and ethical when acting as patient advocate
  
• Comfortable with clinical decision making and critical thinking
  
• Skilled at providing calm, effective crisis intervention
  
• Confident in utilizing the nursing process to provide competent, safe, effective patient care
  
• Accomplished at providing motivated leadership and constructive feedback
  
• Consistently demonstrate professional, positive attitude
  
• Familiar with computerized documentation and analyzing client databases
  
• Proven ability to readily establish effective rapport with co-workers
  

ADDITIONAL EXPERIENCE

09/08-09/09 XXXX Regional Center America, USA

Psychology Technician- XXXXX Cottages

• Assisted in developing and implementing behavior plans for developmentally disabled individuals
  
• Responsible for teaching clients appropriate self-expression and social interaction
  
• Acted in supervisory role as a support staff member
  
• Certified to perform and instruct employees in techniques for managing aggressive behavior in crises
  

09/06- 08/08 XXXX Residential America, USA

Residential Support Supervisor- Main Campus

• Assisted in developing, and implementing behavior plans for developmentally disabled clients in a therapeutic group home setting
  
• Accountable for monitoring data collection by staff on a daily basis
  
• Coordinated weekly multi-disciplinary treatment team and goal setting meetings
  
• Responsible for supervising and providing periodic performance reviews for approximately 14 direct-care staff members
  
• Completed investigations of suspected/alleged abuse
  

01/06- 09/06 XXXX Children's Home America, USA

Senior Resident Advisor- XXXX Assessment Unit

• Assisted in developing and implementing behavioral interventions for adolescents in a therapeutic group home
  
• Developed and implemented multiple accountability forms
  
• Responsible for completing daily Medicaid billing for approximately 12 clients on a daily basis
  

05/05-10/05 XXXX Academy America, USA

Office Manager- The XXXX Home

• Acted in supervisory role as administration staff member
  
• Orienting staff to in-house procedure
  
• Developed procedures to decrease expenditures and enhance patient care
  
• Created and maintained multiple databases on approximately 15 staff members and 10 clients
  

EDUCATION

2010-Present XXXX Community College America, USA

Associate's/Nursing

2002-2005 University of XXXX America, USA

Bachelor's/Psychology

2000-2002 XXXX Community College America, USA

Associate's/Biology

PERSONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS

• Created, maintain, and act as administrator for online communication board for 2012 ADN graduating class
  
• Developed user-friendly clinical forms and streamlined existing clinical tools that have been adopted by my nursing program
  
• Volunteer for Relay for Life and Wounded Warrior Project
  

[nurseprnRN, BSN, RN]

i'd suggest a few things. your sentence fragments are fine (though you could cut the number down by half to have greater impact) but they should all match in form-- parallel construction is pleasing to the eye and cognitive parts . e.g.,

• assertive and ethical
  
• comfortable
  
• skilled
  
• confident
  
• accomplished
  
• consistently demonstrate ((not adjectives! does not match!))
  
• familiar with
  
• proven ability ((not adjectives! does not match!))
  

likewise:

• assisted (verb)
  
• responsible (adjective)
  
• acted (verb)
  
• certified (adjective)
  

and so forth c all the other sections

[BiohazardBetty]

That's great advice... Thank you!