Admission Essay Critiques and Feedback

  1. Hi,

    I am finishing up my personal statement for a Nursing School admission and would love to get some critiques and feedback on how to strengthen my personal statement (be as brutal as possible). I'm conflicted with my personal statement because the more I read it I feel that it is either too personal or too cliché. I can PM you my Personal Statement if you'd like to read it.

    If you do decide to read it thank you so much!
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  3. by   Devon Rex
    Hello!

    I'll give it a shot, but also send me the instructions in what the school is asking you to submit.

  4. by   jr1991
    Quote from Devon Rex
    Hello!

    I'll give it a shot, but also send me the instructions in what the school is asking you to submit.

    Thank you so much! Now I have to figure out a way to PM you since I don't know how

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