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1. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   I am unable to send or respond to private messages because I have not had enough posts... anyway that you for the revisions. I have added and taken away some things and I believe its a pretty good essay, I know id except me =)

2. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   Yep, just found that out... Bummer.

3. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   I don't know how to send a private message and it wont let me repost it. Any ideas?

4. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   It wont let me post my essay again due to ''terms of service" I will try to private message you.

5. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   Thank you for taking time to read my essay. I did have that mind body and soul part in there but took it out during my first round of revisions, I think I will put it back in there. I will go back to my outline and expand on the elements to make it m...

6. advice on preadmission nursing essay #2

   mackenstadtb posted a topic in Pre-Nursing

   Ok this is nursing essay number 2. Explain in detail how you will commit to the demands and responsibilities of a nursing program? The essay is two pages doubled spaced, which is the requirement. I know I still need to fix punctuation and grammar and...

7. feedback on admission essay

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   You guys are so great I really appreciate this advice. It's super helpful and helps me understand how to be a better writer. Revisions underway! :)

8. feedback on admission essay

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   Thank you so much for the feedback I really appreciate it. I will work on some more revisions. I'm feeling more confident about my work and my abilities to write so thank you guys for your help.

9. feedback on admission essay

   mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

   Revised. any feedback is much appreciated and criticism is welcomed. I guess I have never been a strong writer but am dedicated to getting into this nursing program. I know I have what it takes its just hard to put into word to convince people why. P...

10. Medical Assistant or Straight to BSN?

    mackenstadtb replied to FlowerAD's topic in Pre-Nursing

    it sounds like your pretty set on being in the medical field but have you every worked in a clinical setting? I became a MA first to see if it was a good fit. I have been a MA for 6 years now and have gained a lot of good experience in multiple diff...

11. feedback on admission essay

    mackenstadtb replied to mackenstadtb's topic in Pre-Nursing

    yes you are exactly right. Its a rough draft and as I was typing I threw more crap in it to make it longer. Thank you very much for your feedback. Working on revisions now.

12. feedback on admission essay

    mackenstadtb posted a topic in Pre-Nursing

    Hey all, I am applying for nursing school in hopes of starting November 16th. I never thought I was a bad writer until now. I guess the essays i have wrote have not been as important. I have 3 essays to write, the first one is Why are you pursuing a ...