Nursing School Entrance Essay

[Shenandoah]

Hi there,

I'm currently finishing up my pre-requisites and working on my admissions applications for a BSN program. I've put together a rough draft of my entrance essay, but would love it if someone with some experience would take a look at it and offer suggestions. I've been in the business world for quite a long time - I can whip out a 60 page power-point presentation in no time, but am having trouble writing the essay. Especially since it's about me! :imbar

Any help would be appreaciated! Please get out your red pen and PM me if you are interested in reading what I have so far.

Thanks!

[SmilingBluEyes]

pm me w/the essay...

i am happy to help if i can