What do you think about my essay for nursing school
on "why you want to become a nurse?" . Please comment your suggestions it'll be a great help for me. Thank you so much.
Being a Nurse Is More Than a Job, It's a lifetime Treasure and achievement. The advantages of a profession of lifetime learning, headway openings, work adaptability, and aiding those in require. Nursing has always been my passion since I was a little girl. I remember my family and I were informed that my 86-year-old great-grandmother has slipped in the bathroom and cracked her spinal bone. I was really in a big shock when I heard about it because she was always very careful and cautious about everything she did, excluding the fact that she was really old. I was at the time was on my summer vacation after fourth grade. I remember my great-grandmother as abrupt, and physically active. It was now time for someone to take care of her. Knowing that her condition is going to deteriorate, I took initiative to take really good care of her during my summer vacation. Everyday I fed her as directed by my parents, watch her favorite show on television. It gave me the feeling of gracious nurturing that I would want other people to receive if they were sick. Unfortunately, she passed away when I was a week away to go to my fifth grade. I knew I truly touched her heart, because I could see that in her eyes during the days I took care of her.
People want to have a sense of relief leaving their loved ones in the hospital and I want to be that person that will assure them that their loved one is in great hands. During my first year in college, I came to know about the volunteering opportunity at a hospital near me. I went to the orientation and started to volunteer there. I was assigned to volunteer at a ward and it was totally a new experience for me. I encountered with patients who came from different backgrounds and happened to meet their families. I was able to help patients with feeding. They started to talk to me as if I am their family member. Until then I didn't know even a volunteer could make a difference in people's life. When I see these people being happy because they had someone to talk to in a room of machines it fulfills my heart. That was the time I truly believed that Nurses are angels on earth. If I ever become what I dreamed of all these years, I would do only my best to make a difference in people's life.