Recommendation for Personal Statement

Asherah, BSN, RN · Jan 10, 2007

Everyone's comments have been very helpful. I'm still very stuck and need someone that advises on these all the time.
I've answered all the questions, and written down my thoughts, which leaves me with a LOT. 7 pages of stuff to be exact, and since I'm not actually on any admissions committees, I have no idea what to include or not include. Or how far to go back.
It would be nice if there were an academic advisor or other professional that advises on these all the time. There really isn't much since I'm not currently in school...
Do you have any ideas or suggestions that you (or someone you know has used?) in getting this distilled to 2 double spaced pages? I've got ALL the answers, I just don't know how to reduce it.:uhoh21:

There is an abundance of good advice on this thread (and others) regarding what should and shouldn't be included in a personal statement. I really don't think there is any harm in asking friends, family or professional peers to read the statement for clarity. However, I think the fact that personal statements are weighted so heavily shows us that these admissions committees are hoping that applicants can properly edit themselves and follow any instructions about what to include or exclude (if given).

This post isn't intended to be harsh, but I think the key is to go with your gut, and use your best judgment.