my updated resume/cover letter. needing honest critiques

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    so i kinda posted days ago but none replied, luckily someone from the real world (thru email means) helped me "up" my resume, but Im not really in the habit of always disturbing them as they are always busy and we have different times (other side of the earth). in my desperation i had to ask again once more I really need your help guys I've been working on this 2 weeks already *sob* im open to any comments, Thank you in advance!
    here is my resume, there's actually 3 versions:
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    1st VERSION
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    NAME, RN, BSN
    ADDRESS ● PHONE ● EMAIL@EMAIL.com


    PROFILE
    Highly-motivated, goal driven, and client-focused professional seeking position as a Registered Nurse.

    EDUCATION
    Bachelor of Science in Nursing, April 2010, University, CITY, COUNTRY

    LICENSE
    New York State Registered Nurse, granted August 22, 2012

    RELATED EXPERIENCE
    Volunteer: Clinical Research Assistant – March 19-30, 2012; INSTITUTE NAME, PLACE
    • Assisted with research-related procedures and patient care per protocol.
    • Organized and filed regulatory documents and other research-related files in fast working pace.
    • Performed other tasks as instructed by Clinical Research Director and Research Coordinator.
    Home Caregiver – March 6-13, 2012; PLACE
    • Provided care for a bedridden client based on health status & continuance of already implemented actions
    Physical Therapist Aide – February 2012;PLACE
    • Assisted clients from admission to therapy under the direction of a physical therapist
    Home Health Aide – August 2011 – January 2012; PLACE
    • Provided structured, adaptive, and consistent activities to the disabled directed towards reaching daily goals based on general and health needs on an afterschool care basis.
    • Promoted positive behaviors.
    • Reported daily activities and discussed events and ideas with other health care providers to create convenient solutions to existing problem.
    Home Health Aide – February 2011; PLACE
    · Assisted with activities of daily living to a fully dependent individual.

    Relief Operations Volunteer, “Operation TYPHOON Program – September 2010; , PLACE
    • Donated, prepared, and delivered relief goods to Typhoon victims and implemented orders assigned by a team leader.
    Volunteer: “Operation Smile” – September 2009; Medical Center
    • Participated in a program under proctor/clinical instructor supervision, which offers free surgeries for children with cleft lip, cleft palate, and other facial deformities.
    ACTIVITIES & AFFILIATIONS
    Red Cross Youth Collegiate Council – Disaster Management Committee, Member, ( University, 2006-2008)
    Voluntarios De Rescate – Kampo Uno Rescue Organization, Member, (College, 2005-2006); Basic high angle rescue, rappelling, and survival; experienced first-aid and rescue simulation drill and practice.

    OTHER SKILLS
    • Computer and internet proficient – MS Office, search engine, typing speed up to 70-75wpm
    • Bilingual English and Foregin language
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    2nd VERSION
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    NAME, BSN, RN
    PHONE,ADRESS,EMAIL


    PROFILE
    Highly-motivated, goal driven, and client-focused professional seeking position as a Registered Nurse, Recognized as independent, self-starter, and a quick-learner. Excellent communication and organizational skills.

    EDUCATION
    New York State Registered Nurse, Active since August 22, 2012
    Bachelor of Science in Nursing, UNIVERSITY,CITY,COUNTRY April 2010

    EXPERIENCE
    Volunteer: Clinical Research Assistant – March 19-30, 2012; PLACE
    Home Caregiver – March 6-13 2012; PLACE
    Physical Therapist Aide – February 2012; PLACE
    Home Health Aide – August 2011 – January 2012; PLACE
    Home Health Aide – February 2011; PLACE
    Relief Operations Volunteer, “Operation TYPHOON” Program – September 2010; PLACE
    Volunteer: “Operation Smile” – September 2009; PLACE

    SKILLS
    Management and Leadership
    • Trained and assigned as Shift Person-in-Charge at leading a 3-4 team to maximize efficiency and effectivity. Assisted the Manager in training newly employed staff
    • Acted as leader in a college research group and provided research related tasks to 12 members.
    Patient/Client Care
    • Provided home health assistance to a partially dependent mentally disabled individual based on general and health needs on an afterschool care basis.
    • Provide assistance to clients recovering from injuries, illnesses, and surgeries under the direction of a physical therapist
    • Reported daily activities and discussed events and ideas with other health care providers to create convenient solutions to existing problem.
    • Assisted with research-related procedures and patient care per protocol.
    Administrative
    · Computer and internet proficiency – MS Office, search engines, typing speed up to 70-75wpm
    · Organized and filed regulatory documents and other research-related files in fast working pace.
    Language
    · Bilingual English and foreign language

    ACTIVITIES & AFFILIATIONS
    · Member, Red Cross Youth Collegiate Council – Disaster Management Committee, (UNIVERSITY, 2006-2008)
    · Member, Voluntarios De Rescate – Kampo Uno Rescue Organization
    (Basic high angle rescue, rappelling, and survival) experienced first-aid and rescue simulation drill and practice, (COLLEGE, 2005-2006)



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    COVER LETTER
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    [DATE] 2012

    [INSTITUTION NAME]

    Dear [Hiring Manager Name],

    It is of my utmost interest to work as a Registered Nurse at your institution as referred by a relative who happens to be a personal contact of your employee. I strongly believe with my accomplishments and excellent capabilities, as an entry-level nurse I am a great match to your needs.

    I am offering you four years of progressive experience of patient care as a student nurse in hospital and community, excellent organizing, strategic planning and problem solving skills demonstrated often in my home health aide experience and during nursing process, and attention to detail. In addition, I can offer to participate in research, familiarization with protocols, assist execution of screening procedures and filing data in great detail. I can assure you great relations with people involved. I usually set goals to work in a fast-paced manner, and absorb information quickly as inspired by previous mentors. I am proud of my being positive, knowledge/skill-hungry, professional and a believer that I can do anything I believe you will be interested to witness with which should make me an ideal candidate for the position.

    Enclosed is my resume and references for your review and in any case would welcome the opportunity to speak with you in time. I thank you for giving my resume your time and consideration.


    Respectully,
    NAME
    Last edit by malicexmirage on Sep 19, '12 : Reason: thank you
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