help me rephrase this please!

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    "Monitored and reported any critical changes to baseline in vital signs and blood sugar values to immediate supervisor."

    I am a nurse intern/ glorified nurse tech and am applying for my first Rn job. Is there a way to better phrase this idea?
    Thank you in advance!
    -sd
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    I think everything sound fine except the immediate supervisor. I think maybe putting preceptor or something sounds better.

    Also, I would allow for your reference people to mention you are a glorified tech because even though you might be, it sounds slightly on the cocky side. I am not saying you aren't, but it sounds better when it comes from a reference rather than your self. I know you aren't putting that on the resume, but still...
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    Quote from SNB1014
    "Monitored and reported any critical changes to baseline in vital signs and blood sugar values to immediate supervisor."
    Monitored Vital signs and POC glucoses, reporting critical values to RN
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    Effectively communicates vital signs, behavior changes and blood sugar values with appropriate follow up as instructed per the RN.
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