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Feedback and constructive criticism on my resume

  1. 0 Hello everyone. My name is Michelle and I have graduated in May 2012 with my BSN. I have actively been looking for a job since the beginning of september. I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my resume. Here it is:
    Last edit by mizzmichelle21 on Nov 13, '12
  2. 5 Comments

  3. Visit  tacomaster profile page
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    Your resume is all jacked up. It did not copy paste correctly so I can't give a reliable opinion. Sorry.
  4. Visit  mizzmichelle21 profile page
    #2 0
    I will fix that. Sorry about that.
  5. Visit  mizzmichelle21 profile page
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    (contact information redacted by moderator)
    To obtain a position as a registered nurse where I can fully utilize my nursing education and training; in addition to my interpersonal skills to provide the highest level of patient care.

    Lehman College/CUNY, Bronx, NY
    - Bachelor of Science in Nursing
    - GPA:3.8

    Dewitt Clinton HighSchool,Bronx, NY
    - RegentsHigh School Diploma, achieved June 2007
    - Macys Honors Program Participant

    • Fundamentals Of Nursing : Hebrew Home for the Aged, 08/10-12/10

    - Medical/Surgical Nursing I:Albert Einstein-Weiler Hospital, 01/11-05/11
    - Maternity/Community/Pediatrics: Jacobi MedicalCenter/North Central Bronx Hospital/Bronx Lebanon Hospital, 08/11-12/11
    - Medical/Surgical Nursing II:James J. Peters Veterans Administration Hospital, 01/12-05/12

    02/08-Present,MODERN HEALTH RESOURCES, Bronx, NY
    BLS Instructor
    • Teach basic life support training to prepare individuals for certification
    • Demonstrate CPR on a manikin and provide the necessary information for the candidates to prepare for the certification exam

    American Heart Association,Bronx, NY
    • Certified BLS Instructor; 04/30/12-04/30/14
    • ACLS Provider; 09/30/12-09/30/14

    NYS Department of Health;Bureau of Emergency Medical Svc
    s., Albany, NY
    - Certified EMT-Basic, No. 356506; 07/31/11-07/31/14
    • Sigma Theta Tau International Society of Nursing, Delta Zeta Chapter
    • Magna Cum Laude
    • Presidential Scholar; Spring ’09, Fall ’09, Spring ‘10
    • Dean’s List: Fall ‘10

    • Knowledge of Microsoft Office, Word and PowerPoint
    • Team player who demonstrates strong verbal, written, and interpersonal communication skills
    • Basic ECG interpretation

    REFERENCES (Contact information redacted by moderator)

    Last edit by JustBeachyNurse on Nov 13, '12 : Reason: Removed names/ToS
  6. Visit  tacomaster profile page
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    Your resume looks really good. The only thing I would suggest is possibly including the total amount of clincial hours you had at each site. Is "manikin" the correct way to spell that? I thought it was spelled mannequin. I am trying to finalize my resume. All of my background is IT related and now I'm switching to nursing.
  7. Visit  mizzmichelle21 profile page
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    Thank you so much. I did spell mannequin wrong!!!!!! I will also include my clincal hours as well. Thanks for the feedback.