Bad resumes/good resumes *rant*

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I'm assisting with hiring a new case manager RN and would like to vent about the HORRIBLE quality resumes I am seeing in the mile high stack we're reading through.

#1 problem: basic spelling, grammar, punctuation and command of the English language. I don't really care if it's your first, second or ninth language. You will need to communicate with and document about our patients in clear, concise, correct and understandable English. Period. Yes, we toss resumes with ONE TYPO in the trash. That typo represents a typo you'd miss on a med list or MD order that could mean life or death.

#2 problem: length! My goodness, people. We don't need a novel. Even RNs with 10+ years of experience should be able to sum it up in 2 pages or less. We're not interested in reading your past job descriptions. Just hit the highlights that pertain to the position you're applying for, and an accomplishment or two that will get our attention (chaired a committee, piloted a program, won an award). Also, as much as I admire family parenting/elder care, it's not job experience that belongs on a resume, no matter how "special needs" your family members were. (Honestly, I see so much of this on resumes. Inappropriate space filler). Talk about it in the interview!

#3 problem: listing an "objective." We KNOW what you're applying for and why. The "objective" on a resume died a decade ago, please stop using it! And leave off your high school diploma, no one cares.

Things we like to see right off the bat:

Immediate list of 3 or 4 strengths specific to the position

Bulleted list of licenses, certifications, with issue/expiration month/year

Any significant continuing education accomplished or in progress (as in, a certification or degree)

Any languages spoken fluently

And please. Use a common font like Times New Roman in 12 point, through the WHOLE document. Keep bold/italics/underlining to a minimum. No color. No curlicues. No pictures. No logos. Send it as a PDF *and* Word attachment, embed it in the email AND send or fax a hard copy, that kind of effort gets our attention. So does following up with a thank you.

Simple stuff. I can't believe the whining I hear from unemployed nurses, then see the back end of things where the majority of the job seekers reflect such poor attention to detail and minimal effort.

Specializes in Neuro.

I love your post. Can you look at my resume if I PM you? I would love your feedback. Hook me up. :)

Specializes in ED, trauma.

Would someone be wiling to look at my resume??? Please PM me! I will be a new graduate nurse in a few months and have had NO luck securing any hospital job at this point. I must be doing something wrong, I need help!

Please!!

Specializes in Adult/Ped Emergency and Trauma.

I am always willing to help, I have been there. I didn't become good at resume writing overnight. I had to research it thoroughly to find out what current employers are looking for. So instead of PMing each of you, I will show you what I have found out. Just make sure you hit these points within your Resume. Secondly, don't forget the "homerun" a Cover Letter can bring, and its importance. It is your one chance to flat-out ask for an interview to sell your skills and knowledge at the INTERVIEW. If you are making interviews you are doing something right. I am going to type it up on a thread right now so I don't derail this one. I will name the thread "Getting Your Desired Position 101."

Specializes in ED, trauma.

Unfortunately....I am not even getting calls for an interview. My references are fine. So there must be something I am doing wrong with my resume/cover letter. I am becoming increasingly disheartened at the economy and the way new grads are facing brick walls when applying for jobs.

Specializes in ED, trauma.

I will look got your thread Boston! I could certainly use the help! Thanks. :)

Perfect grammar doesn't guarantee a good nurse, but it will help with finding that job and charting in a readable manner. I've seen some notes charted by nurses that, due to spelling and grammatical errors, would not hold up in court.

Wow! I am kind or nervous to post on this topic because I may mess up on my grammar or spelling. This is just a forum and not a college paper, right? Ha ha! Just kidding, but I am paying extra attention to my commas and spelling in this post.

I understand why grammar and spelling are important for a job resume, but is it true that if you don't put a comma where it should be when charting it would not stand up in court? That would be too picky, wouldn't it? That kind of freaks me out a bit. What is the criteria for grammar and spelling errors in charting? I would think it would be more then just simple mistakes, correct? Oh, and I love the OP. It is such a great reference to have. I am putting it in my favorites file for the future when I am done with school.

Sorry if my grammar suckes in this post. I am not good at grammar at all, but when writing college papers and anything that needs to be professiona, l I do try very hard to have the best grammar and spelling possible. It does not come naturally to me at all. I think I added to many commas in this post for instance. LOL! Oh well!

Specializes in OR, Nursing Professional Development.
Wow! I am kind or nervous to post on this topic because I may mess up on my grammar or spelling. This is just a forum and not a college paper, right? Ha ha! Just kidding, but I am paying extra attention to my commas and spelling in this post.

I understand why grammar and spelling are important for a job resume, but is it true that if you don't put a comma where it should be when charting it would not stand up in court? That would be too picky, wouldn't it? That kind of freaks me out a bit. What is the criteria for grammar and spelling errors in charting? I would think it would be more then just simple mistakes, correct? Oh, and I love the OP. It is such a great reference to have. I am putting it in my favorites file for the future when I am done with school.

Sorry if my grammar suckes in this post. I am not good at grammar at all, but when writing college papers and anything that needs to be professiona, l I do try very hard to have the best grammar and spelling possible. It does not come naturally to me at all. I think I added to many commas in this post for instance. LOL! Oh well!

Here's a non-nursing example. Think about how differences in punctuation give the two different sentences completely different meanings. The same thing can happen with nursing documentation.

An English professor wrote the words, “Woman without her man is nothing” on the blackboard and directed his students to punctuate it correctly.

The men wrote: “Woman, without her man, is nothing.”

The women wrote: “Woman: Without her, man is nothing.”

Here's a non-nursing example. Think about how differences in punctuation give the two different sentences completely different meanings. The same thing can happen with nursing documentation.

An English professor wrote the words, "Woman without her man is nothing" on the blackboard and directed his students to punctuate it correctly.

The men wrote:
"Woman, without her man, is nothing."

The women wrote:
"Woman: Without her, man is nothing."

Great example. Very funny as well. Thank you for answering my question.

when i did some hiring at a previous business job i did throw away every resume with a typo. i know it sounds harsh, because we are all human and we do make mistakes. however, a resume is supposed to be the best reflection of you and demonstrate how much you want this job. if you couldn't take the time to proof your resume and show me how much you want this job, i can't waste my time in following up with you.

resumes need to highlight you at your best. period.

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