Broken Hearted. AKA: A Valentine's Story Sweet Enough to Rot Your Teeth - page 2

by CheesePotato 15,842 Views | 20 Comments

Warning: Proceed with caution! The following is so sickeningly sweet, so saccharine, that it will rot your teeth. And I do mean rot 'em good. I am a cynic to the core of my soul and I think, for just one moment last night,... Read More


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    CheesePotatoe, you are awesome! love that story!
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    That was great and oh so sweet.
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    CheesePotato, you are one of the greatest storytellers ever born. If you don't make a book out of your funny, wise, sardonic, touching, hilarious and heart-warming tales, the world will be poorer for it. "Write" on, CP!!!
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    Tender story + sardonic wit = a well-told tale worth hearing. Form and content both rate and A+.
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    loved it!! when i got to your "singles awarness day" i laughed so hard, i snorted! thanks for another great one, cheese potato!
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    Everybody together now... AWWWWWWWWWWWW!
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    how sweet!
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    "So this gent goes all pear shaped over in Cath Lab" What does that mean, something to do with the ekg reading? (not a surgical nurse)
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    Quote from brick195969
    "So this gent goes all pear shaped over in Cath Lab" What does that mean, something to do with the ekg reading? (not a surgical nurse)
    Not necessarily limited to surgery. Basically, it means either the brown stuff hit the oscillating blades or the patient was found to have really bad cardiac disease and needed emergency surgery.
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    Nicely written I can tell Dentistry may not be the next career path for you but have you thought of a writing career?
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