allnurses.com commercial - must see :) - page 5

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this is our first attempt at a commercial to promote allnurses.com, we hope you like it and we would love to hear your feedback! we will be displaying this at a few nursing conventions this year. it's only 30 seconds long, so... Read More


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    Love it!!!
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    As for the video not mentioning students... that is a good point, but this was designed for a critical care nursing convention, so the objective was to target the nursing audience, and when you only have 30 seconds it's tough to fit everything in.

    Maybe eventually, we will have another more informative longer video which will explain in more detail

    I don't think I mentioned this before, but I actually forgot about this video needing to get finished until a few days ago. So it was a complete rush job, I only spent a few hours coming up with the script details, screenshots, and general idea of the video. Thankfully the company that assembled the video polished it all up and I think it turned out pretty good, and based on most of the feedback, it was quite positive.

    Thanks again for all of the feedback, keep it coming, you all rock and make allnurses.com what it is!
    Last edit by brian on May 14, '09
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    I also forgot to mention when it shows "Venting" I'm not sure I'd keep that in, I understand that many of us rant on here but it made a rather sour point for me when I saw it on the video. I'm not exactly sure why it just doesn't fit quite right. Maybe its just me...

    I just thought of something too, with all this new traffic from the commercials and publicity all of the moderators and administrators are going to be rather busy trying to keep up with it all. Were going to have to do our best to be patient and try our best to help out a bit.

    !Chris
    Last edit by cjcsoon2brn on May 15, '09
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    for the next version: text caption

    mentoring:
    students & new nurses



    ending tagline: we're open 24/7, come visit us anytime for professional news or relaxation!
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    Oh, I think you should keep 'venting' in. That's truth in advertising, IMO. It's a large part of what goes on here, and forewarned is forearmed. The video doesn't mention 'ranting' btw, only 'venting'.
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    Liked it. Nice, to the point. Wonder if you could do a longer one showing real nurses saying how great this site is?
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    I added the following annotation the last 5 seconds of the video


    I like the idea of testimonials from users for future ads. I'll have a video camera at the convention if any antendees want to give a video testimonial, that would be great.

    Maybe we should put up a request for members to send in video testimonials of why they love AN
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    Excellent....nurses need this more and more.


    TuTonka
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    Quote from brian
    I added the following annotation the last 5 seconds of the video


    I like the idea of testimonials from users for future ads. I'll have a video camera at the convention if any antendees want to give a video testimonial, that would be great.

    Maybe we should put up a request for members to send in video testimonials of why they love AN
    Brian do you meet every year in L.A.? I would love to attend one next year.
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    Quote from TuTonka
    Brian do you meet every year in L.A.? I would love to attend one next year.
    Hi TuTonka, we do various trade shows, the location is always different. We'd love for you to make it some time too
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