allnurses.com commercial - must see :) - pg.2 | allnurses

allnurses.com commercial - must see :) - page 2

this is our first attempt at a commercial to promote allnurses.com, we hope you like it and we would love to hear your feedback! we will be displaying this at a few nursing conventions this year. ... Read More

  1. Visit  cjcsoon2brn profile page
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    I like the commercial but I agree with the other user who said that it might be cool to have a few clips from real nurses who can say how they like the site or something. It might be a nice way to visually add a little more interest to the commercial because most of the commercial is just pictures of the website which only shows the forum. I like the commercial either way, I just think that adding in a few nurses or having Brian make a little cameo and speak about the site might break it up a little bit and add in some visual interest.

    !Chris
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  2. Visit  ohmeowzer RN profile page
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    i love it and it's about time there was a commerical about this awesome website !!
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  3. Visit  FxAngel profile page
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    i liked the commericial. it was good and to the point. i just thought it should have said something about nursing students too. it is a great website and students nurse come to help each other and vent as well. i think something should have been said about this.

    jenn kristin:angel2:
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  4. Visit  leslie :-D profile page
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    i like it...can't say i'm loving it though.
    there seems to be a rather long pause betw the end of the last sentence and the end of the video.
    i felt like i was left hanging, where i think the addition of a closing, inviting type sentence would make it more complete...
    to the effect of, " so grab a cup of coffee and join us..." type thing.

    just sayin'...

    leslie
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  5. Visit  Brian profile page
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    Everyone, thanks for your feedback! I appreciate it.

    This video was designed to target nurses for next weeks AACN NTI conference to be shown in the convention center tv screens, buses, and some hotels.

    The ending is kind of cut off, as the original video that we are showing at the show has a different ending inviting viewers to visit our booth #4235 for a chance to win 1 of 3 ipod touchs, daily drawing etc... The original video has a more natural flow at the ending
    (I'll post the original video with the other ending some maybe tomorrow.)

    Thanks again for all your feedback! It will be helpful for making adjustments and new ideas for future promotions.
  6. Visit  LovingNurse profile page
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    Hey Brian ... I think it's fantastic - just the way it is!
    You're good.
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  7. Visit  zuzi profile page
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    Is short, is focused is professional...is good
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  8. Visit  ~Mi Vida Loca~RN profile page
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    I am gonna have to go search one of those topics I saw on this LOL. It looks great.
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  9. Visit  Tweety profile page
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    w00t!
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  10. Visit  CityKat profile page
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    It's perfect
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  11. Visit  DelMintaka profile page
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    Excellent! :yeahthat:

    If you have an alternate version, you could perform a simple A/B test (split test) to determine which one draws the greatest response. You just show each version to a sample of, say, 200 viewers and compare the number of positive responses each sample produces. Sometimes a minor modification (eg, changing a single word in the title) can have a huge effect, increasing the response rate by 20% or more. But that may be more work than it is worth.
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  12. Visit  Spiderella profile page
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    I didn't like it. If I saw that, I wouldn't use the site, it's just not inspiring enough and it was kinda dry. . I think having some nurses talk about it would be better...something along the lines of the I Am a Phoenix commercials.
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  13. Visit  Baloney Amputation profile page
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    I like to search this site. I find that incredibly helpful. Maybe a ditty about that would be good.

    I think the floating boxes are a bit distracting, too.

    I personally wasn't put off by the voice pause at the end. It directed my concentration to the text on the screen.
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