Please help me!

I am a brand new RN - BSN student and I have my first writting assignment. Writing is my greatest weakness! I hate my writing and I feel like it's at a 8th grade level. This assignment is supposed to be writing an APA paper about yourself. I'm concerned about my paper's flow, the organization, and words I used. I would be so greatful if someone could proof read it and tell me an HONEST opinion, perhaps even point out specific things that should be changed. I am sick with worry about this paper! Please! could someone private message me and let me send my paper for them to proofread?

Thank you for reading!