[sun12]

Hey all,
Can you please help me in writing an essay in the topic " how would you define Compassion and integrity with your character" A little bit of hint would be a lot helpful for me

[Daytonite]

How can we do that when we don't know you? You have to discuss your character.

[pharmgirl]

As I was reading the essay I was thinking the same things as Shane, take out the "I"s and also paragraph structure....I got a little lost but that might be the whole "cut/paste" thing on the post. Take Shane's advice and you have an awesome essay. (agreed topic SUCKS, not your fault tho) lol

[sun12]

Hey Pharmgirl,
Thanks for your advise but who is shane??

[pharmgirl]

OK, am I losing it? I swear there was an in-depth post by Shane talking about the use of I's and focusing more on different personal experiences instead of just the ICU experience............am I losing it???? omg now I'm scared

[tiggerdagibit]

Originally Posted by pharmgirl

OK, am I losing it? I swear there was an in-depth post by Shane talking about the use of I's and focusing more on different personal experiences instead of just the ICU experience............am I losing it???? omg now I'm scared

lol.. it's on page 1. I have to giggle because that is SO something I would do!

[sun12]

Thanks Pharm girl!!

[pharmgirl]

Originally Posted by tiggerdagibit

lol.. it's on page 1. I have to giggle because that is SO something I would do!

Thanks tigger.....now I dont feel so bad LOL.. I really thought "omg I'm not even started the program yet and I've lost it" LOL